i answered the phone
not expecting to hear YOU
on the other end
not expecting to hear YOU
on the other end
imagine my shock
as i listened to a voice
almost forgotten
at a loss for words
i sat silently, waiting
for you to hang up
i sat silently, waiting
for you to hang up
© Karen
Haiku Sequence, a number of haiku grouped together continuing one thought, for combined impact. Though a continuation of thought, each haiku should be able to stand alone.
very strong feelings haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery powerful. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteFabulous, evocative.
ReplyDeleteMysterious... I know that tension well.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
ReplyDeleteHmmm, been there!! Nicely done!
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Oh wow. That was brilliant. Been there too.
ReplyDeleteWow. This really hit me where I live.
ReplyDeleteAre you still waiting?
ReplyDeletePowerful silence.
ReplyDeleteThis blows me away! How do you do it?
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