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1 Mar 2012

Rebirth




soft wind blow through me
gently lift my spirit high
soar beyond the clouds

in the up draught float
hovering above the realm
lofty dreams advance

hope wafts in the breeze
caresses the soul’s shadows
promising rebirth

text and photo ©by Karen @ Something Written/Pixel Posts

Linking with  Poets United - Think Tank Thursday #86
prompt - rebirth

Linking with
Haiku My Heart @ recuerda mi corazon

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Haiku Sequence, a number of haiku grouped together continuing one thought, for combined impact  to cover a sequence. Though a continuation of thought, each haiku should be able to stand alone.
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31 comments:

  1. Laurie Kolp1 March 2012 at 13:02

    So lovely, Karen. I especially like the last verse.

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  2. Judy1 March 2012 at 14:08

    Delicate, meaningful, uplifting. Thank you for the images and sensations.
    Judy

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  3. That Someone1 March 2012 at 14:29

    Divine, photo and haiku.

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  4. BR1 March 2012 at 15:56

    Your words are layered as beautifully as the clouds in your photo.

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  5. Unknown1 March 2012 at 17:24

    Gentle, sweet and soothing. A lovely creation.

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  6. booguloo1 March 2012 at 18:34

    Thanks for sharing.

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  7. Scarlet1 March 2012 at 21:02

    A gentle and lovely write...Very meaningful ~

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  8. Brian Miller1 March 2012 at 22:35

    nice...def soothing in the read...and the promise of rebirth is never a bad one...smiles.

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  9. Elephant's Child2 March 2012 at 00:43

    Something we all need from time to time. Thanks.

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  10. Ebie2 March 2012 at 00:55

    Karen, you have the gift of words. Nicely written.

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  11. Les...2 March 2012 at 05:52

    beautiful, as if written by an angel... *VBS*

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  12. Mary2 March 2012 at 07:32

    Beautiful poem of hope!

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  13. Brother Ollie2 March 2012 at 08:02

    this is a well crafted beauty

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  14. anthonynorth2 March 2012 at 11:08

    Heart warming words.

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  15. Libby2 March 2012 at 11:16

    Karen...this is exquisite

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  16. Anonymous2 March 2012 at 11:54

    loving all the little thoughts of rebirth and spring.
    x..x

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  17. carol l mckenna2 March 2012 at 12:00

    Wonderful words, images, touches my spirit and lifts me up ~ namaste, Carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH ^_^

    ps ~ thanks for 'coming by'. ^_^

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  18. Lea2 March 2012 at 13:04

    Beautiful and a joy to experience, thank you Karen!

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  19. peggy gatto2 March 2012 at 13:40

    Just lovely observations!!!
    thank you!

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  20. Spadoman2 March 2012 at 13:57

    These haiku, alone or as a group, sound like they can send anyone to a peaceful place, a place I'd like to be.

    Peace

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  21. Magical Mystical Teacher2 March 2012 at 16:55

    You've put words in my mouth. I, too, am inviting the soft wind to blow through me.

    Cemetery Fence

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  22. rebecca2 March 2012 at 17:55

    may we all be lifted in such realms of gorgeous beauty
    and float in peace.

    lovely...thank you!

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  23. Helen Campbell2 March 2012 at 19:53

    Beautiful. I needed to read this today. Thank you for sharing.

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  24. Anonymous2 March 2012 at 22:13

    So like Westwind of shelley. :)

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  25. Chèvrefeuille3 March 2012 at 10:15

    Wonderful haiku. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  26. Ella3 March 2012 at 23:15

    I really enjoyed the beauty of your voice~

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  27. aayanman4 March 2012 at 01:47

    Beautiful choice of words,the underlying sentiment comes across nicely.

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  28. Marit4 March 2012 at 05:25

    This haiku evokes a lot of images, beautiful!

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  29. Parmita4 March 2012 at 08:44

    I always love poems that depict the amalgamation of feelings with nature. I couldn't help but imagine myself feeling the same way as depicted in this haiku. It is very refreshing.

    I read your comment on Mara's blog and couldn't resist taking a peek. Poetry blogs always interests me. There are a lot of beautiful pieces here that I would love to read.

    Have a nice day! (✿◠‿◠)

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  30. Me4 March 2012 at 20:14

    This is one of my most favorites yet, wonderful.

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  31. Rachel Hoyt5 March 2012 at 14:21

    So lovely! :)

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