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14 Mar 2012

Excitement




ignite the ozone
quiver beneath sky’s torment
intoxicate me

  ©Karen @Something Written

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Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Prompt - excite(ment)
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21 comments:

  1. G-Man14 March 2012 at 09:40

    Wow Karen...
    Electrifying!!!!

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  2. carol l mckenna14 March 2012 at 10:23

    Energy in a visual and haiku ~ great work ~namaste, Carol ^_^

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  3. anthonynorth14 March 2012 at 11:46

    Felt the vibe in this. Excellent.

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  4. Bruce14 March 2012 at 11:54

    Katisha agrees with the intoxication of lightning in Gilbert & Sullivan's Mikado:

    Volcanoes have a splendour that is grim,
    And earthquakes only terrify the dolts,
    But to him who's scientific
    There's nothing that's terrific
    In the falling of a flight of thunderbolts!

    And I think by "terrific" she means "terrifying".

    "Ignite the ozone" itself is a wonderful image. This haiku really conjures up excitement.

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  5. That Someone.14 March 2012 at 15:38

    Such exhilaration - beautifully penned.

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  6. Ria14 March 2012 at 15:41

    I really love to watch lightening!

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  7. Tara Tyler14 March 2012 at 16:29

    lightning is definitly exciting, as long as it isnt too close! ah!

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  8. Elephant's Child14 March 2012 at 17:07

    Exciting, beautiful and terrifying. Which your words and photo capture beautifully. Thank you.

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  9. Tyrean Martinson14 March 2012 at 19:47

    Wow! Loved the picture and your haiku together. Thank you.

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  10. Magical Mystical Teacher14 March 2012 at 22:55

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  11. Magical Mystical Teacher14 March 2012 at 22:56

    This is a sizzling, snapping vignette!

    Fevered Excitement

    P.S. Thank you so much for not using word verification!!!!!

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  12. Les...14 March 2012 at 23:03

    sensuous interpretation of the moment! well done *S*

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  13. Anonymous14 March 2012 at 23:57

    Very nice direction!! :)

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  14. Anonymous15 March 2012 at 01:52

    I also find storms to be intoxicating, exciting, and electrifying. Fantastic haiku. Especially love the opening.

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  15. Mara15 March 2012 at 04:38

    I was hooked by the first line. Another great work of haiku for you! :)

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  16. Kathy Reed15 March 2012 at 06:05

    Certainly exciting to watch!!

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  17. Anonymous15 March 2012 at 14:52

    Perfect for your picture....nice job!

    R.M. @ newviewfromhere.wordpress.com

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  18. Gemma Wiseman15 March 2012 at 15:28

    Beautiful, impassioned inner drama captured in this haiku! Delightful!

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  19. Anonymous18 March 2012 at 01:19

    intoxicating

    anything but

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  20. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?19 March 2012 at 10:54

    Excellent! Very nicely done :)

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  21. MISH19 March 2012 at 15:31

    Intense... can feel the energy in your words...

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