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11 Mar 2012

The Mag - 108


soft susurrations
carried beyond boundaries
listen in the wind

text©Karen

Linking to The Mag 108

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Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.

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24 comments:

  1. Brian Miller11 March 2012 at 12:21

    susurations is such a cool word...i am listening...

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  2. Tess Kincaid11 March 2012 at 12:22

    Tactile this...lovely...

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  3. Unknown11 March 2012 at 12:31

    cool had to look up the word susurations then grasp the verse ...thank you x

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  4. rel11 March 2012 at 13:16

    Whispering;
    Sweet nothings in one's ear; tittillating.
    rel

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  5. Helen11 March 2012 at 14:11

    Very nice haiku!!

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  6. Judy11 March 2012 at 14:40

    Sound, motion, feeling, insight -- all caught in this tiny verse. Great.

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  7. Unknown11 March 2012 at 16:18

    Sensuously emotive, Karen. Thank you for sharing your expressions.

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  8. Elephant's Child11 March 2012 at 21:43

    Lovely. Thanks.

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  9. S.E.Ingraham11 March 2012 at 23:45

    I'm with Brian - sussurations is such a cool word ... very nice

    http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-dawn.html

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  10. hyperCRYPTICal12 March 2012 at 12:52

    Lovely!

    Anna :o]

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  11. Susan Anderson12 March 2012 at 14:35

    This is my second time in the dictionary this morning!

    =)

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  12. Friko12 March 2012 at 16:18

    I love listening for susurrations in the wind. This is exactly what this Magpie means to me.

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  13. Laurie Kolp12 March 2012 at 17:07

    I love soft susurrations... this is beautiful, Karen.

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  14. Carrie Van Horn12 March 2012 at 17:22

    Love the feel of this one.....beautiful writing!

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  15. Scarlet12 March 2012 at 18:19

    Very nice ~

    Thanks for sharing this with Real Toads ~

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  16. Anonymous12 March 2012 at 18:25

    Fantastic alliteration in "soft susurrations." Love the way you whisper.

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  17. Sherry Blue Sky12 March 2012 at 19:18

    Your haiku is a lovely sussuration in itself:)

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  18. Me12 March 2012 at 19:29

    Another beaut, well done.

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  19. hedgewitch12 March 2012 at 22:25

    Beautiful alliteration.

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  20. cosmos cami13 March 2012 at 10:51

    Yes I had to look up the word...:)
    You did a lovely job with the prompt and I enjoyed your gentle poem.

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  21. Anonymous13 March 2012 at 16:39

    Nicely done. This haiku has a mysterious tone to it.

    Hope you'll come visit me. :)

    -Mara

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  22. teri14 March 2012 at 00:07

    Boundaries and edges...I love how you held together the image with your words.

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  23. Anonymous14 March 2012 at 16:23

    sometimes it's good to stop and listen to the wind, sometimes the wind doesn't give us a choice

    depth of field

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  24. Anonymous17 March 2012 at 13:24

    this poem reads like a prayer.

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