Yes, it can often seem like a maze. great words.
have felt that ~ light does shine through ~ great haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
beautiful and powerful, wise and real. Thank you Karen.
"captive - no ransom" sets such a stern tone. Good contrast to the implied ability to meet the challenge!
Endurance tested true enough!Passing with flying colors of course!Love this one!!
Sometimes its so easy to be caught in that labyrinth, great words.
captive ransom is cooltwo senryu dedicated to the novelist
Wow, so much is packed into this poem. Your haikus always pack a punch, subtle though it might seem at first.
Urban living dictates this. Alone and with a self imposed suffering all in silence. Great thoughts!Hank
You wont get out of it alive!
If we have Ariadne's thread, we may get out...Poppies Lack Endurance
That's poweful!
"lost within life's labyrinth" Have certainly felt like this at times. Great haiku. Thanks so much.
Yes, you have captured it precisely - "life's labyrinth" I like your take on the prompt.Best, M.
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Yes, it can often seem like a maze. great words.
ReplyDeletehave felt that ~ light does shine through ~ great haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeletebeautiful and powerful, wise and real. Thank you Karen.
ReplyDelete"captive - no ransom" sets such a stern tone. Good contrast to the implied ability to meet the challenge!
ReplyDeleteEndurance tested true enough!
ReplyDeletePassing with flying colors of course!
Love this one!!
Sometimes its so easy to be caught in that labyrinth, great words.
ReplyDeletecaptive ransom is cool
ReplyDeletetwo senryu dedicated to the novelist
Wow, so much is packed into this poem. Your haikus always pack a punch, subtle though it might seem at first.
ReplyDeleteUrban living dictates this. Alone and with a self imposed suffering all in silence. Great thoughts!
ReplyDeleteHank
You wont get out of it alive!
ReplyDeleteIf we have Ariadne's thread, we may get out...
ReplyDeletePoppies Lack Endurance
That's poweful!
ReplyDelete"lost within life's labyrinth" Have certainly felt like this at times. Great haiku. Thanks so much.
ReplyDeleteYes, you have captured it precisely - "life's labyrinth" I like your take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteBest, M.