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8 Mar 2012

Moonlight



splendour of the eve
amidst the clouds above us
gentle moonlight touch

gentle moonlight touch
hold me close in your caress
wrap me safely in

wrap me safely in
sheltered from the dark of night
splendour of the eve

text and photo ©by Karen @ Something Written

Linking with Poets United - Think Tank Thursday #87
prompt - moon


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31 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky8 March 2012 at 13:06

    I love the way the beautiful lines repeat and wrap around each other. Lovely.

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  2. Laurie Kolp8 March 2012 at 14:07

    I agree with Sherry... lovely technique, beautiful piece.

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  3. Rinkly Rimes8 March 2012 at 14:14

    You have used a soothing poetic form to honour a soothing poetic light.

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  4. Daydreamertoo8 March 2012 at 14:19

    Beautiful prose to go with a fabulous picture of the lady moon. :)

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  5. That Someone8 March 2012 at 14:29

    Wonderful form. This is so serene and calming, with a touch of romance. Beautifully done, once again.

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  6. Judy8 March 2012 at 15:34

    May you always find safety and peace.
    Judy

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  7. BR8 March 2012 at 15:57

    May you have sweet dreams while caressed in the light of the full moon.

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  8. Anonymous8 March 2012 at 16:05

    the repetition of lines is a nice touch that holds the whole together, and emphasizes the safe wrapping of which you speak

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  9. Anonymous8 March 2012 at 17:53

    very safe wrapping


    senryu of constructed new-natures

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  10. Les...8 March 2012 at 19:14

    absolutely beautiful and perfectly crafted, well done!

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  11. Ella8 March 2012 at 22:55

    I too love the beauty in your technique. So romantic

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  12. Elephant's Child8 March 2012 at 23:15

    Simply enchanting - like your prompt. Thank you.

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  13. Janet Martin9 March 2012 at 01:04

    Perfect! Each one is pure enchantment!

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  14. Kat Mortensen9 March 2012 at 09:48

    The repetitive rhythms seem to mimic the tides of the moon. Very nice!

    (I'm stealing your "no verification" icon. I hope you don't mind.)

    ~Kat

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  15. Anonymous9 March 2012 at 10:49

    This moon is amazing...each of us gazing alone yet together.

    x..x

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  16. Chevrefeuille9 March 2012 at 10:55

    Wonderful! I love this cascading form of haiku. I am not so familiar with it, but I try often to write the cascading haiku form.
    Thank you for a wonderful read and a awesome picture of the moon.

    Blessed be

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  17. Annie Jeffries9 March 2012 at 11:26

    Beautiful how each haiku embraces one, leads to another, and embraces back again.

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  18. foxysue9 March 2012 at 12:02

    I too am comforted by your haiku, thank you for sharing.

    Sue x

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  19. anthonynorth9 March 2012 at 13:21

    A beautiful moonlit trio.

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  20. Dawn Elliott9 March 2012 at 13:27

    The full moon evokes such splendor and joy! Lovely haikus today!!!

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  21. Lea9 March 2012 at 14:32

    I love everything about these glowing pearls of words and image... what a beautiful thing to share this full moon with you and all! Thank you!

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  22. deb did it9 March 2012 at 16:02

    gorgeous selection of words to honor of Full Moon this week!

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  23. carol l mckenna9 March 2012 at 17:31

    Awesome haiku and wonderful photo ~thanks, namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ~ Happy Weekend ^_^

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  24. Inger-M9 March 2012 at 17:41

    Gorgeous shot and awesome poem, love how you repeat the last line of one verse as the first line in the next.

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  25. Magical Mystical Teacher9 March 2012 at 21:19

    The repetition has a restful rhythm about it.

    For Sister Moon

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  26. Mystic_Mom9 March 2012 at 21:54

    This has a sense of the moon's shape in your use of repetition, and it is soothing. A wonderfully crafted read.

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  27. claireylove10 March 2012 at 06:48

    What a beautiful form you've used! To me, it reflects a mind circling in on a thought...

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  28. rebecca10 March 2012 at 09:25

    irresistible,
    your haiku and this generous moon!

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  29. Hazel10 March 2012 at 11:04

    'Splendor of the eve' splendid indeed. ah! just charming.

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  30. Me10 March 2012 at 16:46

    That is so beautiful, it could be put to music.

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  31. Kathy Reed10 March 2012 at 23:56

    You captured the subjects extremely well..

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