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4 Mar 2012

Murmurs




secrets of the soul
subterranean murmurs
whispering desire

©Karen


prompt - underground
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Linking with The Poetry Pantry
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21 comments:

  1. wonderful thoughts, great alliteration.
    Judy

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  2. Perhaps the desires should be shouted out ;)

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  3. An exceptionally beautiful write.

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  4. Subterranean murmurs, love it!

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  5. Wonderful, Karen ~~ :)
    Of course, wishing I had gone along these lines.
    ..

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  6. I love the susurration created by the alliteration.
    Thank you.

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  7. Nicely stated while leaving a sense of mystery.

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  8. O. adore this haiku - senuous
    and deep.

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  9. Such a light touch- just love it.

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  10. mysterious musings *S*

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  11. Oooo...secret desires! Dangerous!

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  12. Secrets ... just remain secret lovely haiku.

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  13. An interesting, unique take on "underground," Karen. You went for the heart and soul of the matter, and your "subterranean murmurs" is a perfect phrase. Loved it. Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/06/rich-men-suck-dverse/

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