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4 Mar 2012

Murmurs




secrets of the soul
subterranean murmurs
whispering desire

©Karen


prompt - underground
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21 comments:

  1. Judy4 March 2012 at 14:22

    wonderful thoughts, great alliteration.
    Judy

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  2. BR4 March 2012 at 14:26

    Perhaps the desires should be shouted out ;)

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  3. booguloo4 March 2012 at 15:53

    Very Nice piece.

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  4. anthonynorth4 March 2012 at 16:34

    Beautifully expressed.

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  5. That Someone4 March 2012 at 16:58

    An exceptionally beautiful write.

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  6. Scarlet4 March 2012 at 17:02

    Very nice haiku ~

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  7. Me4 March 2012 at 20:11

    Subterranean murmurs, love it!

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  8. aayanman4 March 2012 at 21:50

    Nicely done.

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  9. beeguiler4 March 2012 at 22:45

    well crafted ...

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  10. Jim4 March 2012 at 22:47

    Wonderful, Karen ~~ :)
    Of course, wishing I had gone along these lines.
    ..

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  11. Elephant's Child5 March 2012 at 00:59

    I love the susurration created by the alliteration.
    Thank you.

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  12. Anonymous5 March 2012 at 03:32

    Nicely stated while leaving a sense of mystery.

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  13. Mariya Koleva5 March 2012 at 11:11

    great haiku!

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  14. Shauna5 March 2012 at 12:19

    O. adore this haiku - senuous
    and deep.

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  15. Inger-M5 March 2012 at 16:44

    Wonderful, so secretive!

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  16. teri5 March 2012 at 18:23

    Such a light touch- just love it.

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  17. Les...5 March 2012 at 19:50

    mysterious musings *S*

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  18. J Cosmo Newbery6 March 2012 at 04:19

    Oooo...secret desires! Dangerous!

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  19. Chevrefeuille6 March 2012 at 05:57

    Secrets ... just remain secret lovely haiku.

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  20. Sharp Little Pencil7 March 2012 at 13:21

    An interesting, unique take on "underground," Karen. You went for the heart and soul of the matter, and your "subterranean murmurs" is a perfect phrase. Loved it. Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/06/rich-men-suck-dverse/

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  21. Magical Mystical Teacher8 March 2012 at 08:05

    There's something seductive about your words...


    Underground Streams

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