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1 Apr 2012

Deserted



aimless fragrance wafts
blossoms sway in gentle breeze
deserted garden

©Karen


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April 2 prompt - deserted

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  1. Ramesh Sood2 April 2012 at 03:44

    I am sure garden was no more deserted because you went there.. Well written.. RS:)

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  2. Mariya Koleva2 April 2012 at 04:11

    in a while, it won't be deserted :-) and there was fragrance was not entirely "aimless" since such a nice haiku sprang from it.

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  3. debu2 April 2012 at 06:09

    Blossms sway....poignant.

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  4. J Cosmo Newbery2 April 2012 at 06:27

    My sort of garden!

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  5. Magical Mystical Teacher2 April 2012 at 07:09

    There are few places sadder, to my way of thinking, than deserted gardens...and yet to the observant, there are still hidden charms and delicate fragrances...

    Deserted Branches

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  6. Judy2 April 2012 at 07:56

    Fragrance in a deserted garden -- what an interesting juxtaposition!

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  7. carol l mckenna2 April 2012 at 09:43

    lovely haiku ~ well written ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Anonymous2 April 2012 at 10:20

    beautiful..loved it..

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  9. Sri Valli2 April 2012 at 11:39

    blossoms in deserted garden is different thinking....Nice haiku :)
    Thanks for sharing!

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  10. Anonymous2 April 2012 at 15:20

    i like the aimless fragrants, i guess that there are fragrant that have an aim (like farts -> i had to say it!!)

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  11. Chevrefeuille2 April 2012 at 18:55

    This gives me a sad feeling and a happy feeling. Sad because of the blossoms decomposing, but happy because of the fragrance.
    Nicely done, loved reading this one.

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  12. Anonymous2 April 2012 at 19:47

    For some reason, the second line is my favorite. I can almost picture those beautiful blossoms saying in that deserted garden.

    Great writing as usual!

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  13. Grace3 April 2012 at 18:33

    Nice capture of the deserted garden...your pen is getting sharper ~

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  14. Me8 April 2012 at 15:03

    I can almost feel that gentle breeze. Very nice haiku.

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