gently encumbered
vulnerability shown
exposing the soul
©Karen @Something Written
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A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
Linking to The Mag 101
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A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
Linking to The Mag 101
The words perfectly match the photo.
ReplyDeleteOH TO BE ENCUMBERED WHEN EXPOSING MY SOUL
ReplyDeleteTERRIFIC
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteFabulous!
ReplyDeleteJudy
I am savoring the words
ReplyDelete"gently encumbered"...
well done.
Ooh, very nice. : )
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - every word just right.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteThat is an excellent haiku of your observation.
ReplyDelete..daringly awesome!!! exposing the soul - i loved that!!! thanks for the read!!!(:
ReplyDelete~Kelvin
Just beautiful. And how I would love to be that flexible again.
ReplyDeleteI wondered when you would write again. It's been a long time coming, but worth the wait. You've made a good start here, don't stop.
ReplyDeletenice...there is tension in being fully exposed...and the progression of your lines exposes this well...
ReplyDeleteExposing more than
ReplyDeletesoul, gently, carefully bound —
more than black and white.
I journeyed over from Cosmo's latest serviette notes. I'm just beginning to write haiku — wonderful to find you!
Interesting thought, beautifully expressed...
ReplyDeletePerfect words for the pic
ReplyDeleteMatches the picture very nicley!
ReplyDeleteExposing the soul and then some! Nice haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for taking the time to read and comment!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeletedelicious... *S*
ReplyDeletelove your Haiku or short verse.
ReplyDeleteprofound entry.
Great cameo. Thank you
ReplyDelete7 beautiful words for the prompt...
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Hi Karen,
ReplyDeleteI love the haiku, succinct and cutting. Wrapped up for us as neatly as this figure.