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1 Mar 2012

Rebirth




soft wind blow through me
gently lift my spirit high
soar beyond the clouds

in the up draught float
hovering above the realm
lofty dreams advance

hope wafts in the breeze
caresses the soul’s shadows
promising rebirth

text and photo ©by Karen @ Something Written/Pixel Posts

Linking with  Poets United - Think Tank Thursday #86
prompt - rebirth

Linking with
Haiku My Heart @ recuerda mi corazon

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Haiku Sequence, a number of haiku grouped together continuing one thought, for combined impact  to cover a sequence. Though a continuation of thought, each haiku should be able to stand alone.

32 comments:

  1. So lovely, Karen. I especially like the last verse.

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  2. Delicate, meaningful, uplifting. Thank you for the images and sensations.
    Judy

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  3. Divine, photo and haiku.

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  4. Your words are layered as beautifully as the clouds in your photo.

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  5. Gentle, sweet and soothing. A lovely creation.

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  6. A gentle and lovely write...Very meaningful ~

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  7. nice...def soothing in the read...and the promise of rebirth is never a bad one...smiles.

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  8. Something we all need from time to time. Thanks.

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  9. Karen, you have the gift of words. Nicely written.

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  10. beautiful, as if written by an angel... *VBS*

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  11. this is a well crafted beauty

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  12. loving all the little thoughts of rebirth and spring.
    x..x

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  13. Wonderful words, images, touches my spirit and lifts me up ~ namaste, Carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH ^_^

    ps ~ thanks for 'coming by'. ^_^

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  14. Beautiful and a joy to experience, thank you Karen!

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  15. Just lovely observations!!!
    thank you!

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  16. These haiku, alone or as a group, sound like they can send anyone to a peaceful place, a place I'd like to be.

    Peace

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  17. You've put words in my mouth. I, too, am inviting the soft wind to blow through me.

    Cemetery Fence

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  18. may we all be lifted in such realms of gorgeous beauty
    and float in peace.

    lovely...thank you!

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  19. Beautiful. I needed to read this today. Thank you for sharing.

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  20. So like Westwind of shelley. :)

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  21. Wonderful haiku. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  22. I really enjoyed the beauty of your voice~

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  23. Beautiful choice of words,the underlying sentiment comes across nicely.

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  24. This haiku evokes a lot of images, beautiful!

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  25. I always love poems that depict the amalgamation of feelings with nature. I couldn't help but imagine myself feeling the same way as depicted in this haiku. It is very refreshing.

    I read your comment on Mara's blog and couldn't resist taking a peek. Poetry blogs always interests me. There are a lot of beautiful pieces here that I would love to read.

    Have a nice day! (✿◠‿◠)

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  26. This is one of my most favorites yet, wonderful.

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