master of the hours
labouring furiously
smoothes wrinkles in time
text©Karen
Written for - The Mag 109
A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
Linking with-The Poetry Pantry
i like the idea of having machines to smooth out the wrinkles of time
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Really impressive, well done!
ReplyDeletewrinkles in time...great words. Not sure where it takes my mind, but I like it. Laurel
ReplyDeleteWrinkles in time Nice found words I have tried to write a haiku along with this picture, but I didn't succeeded.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Nice haiku that works well with the picture, but also stands alone :)
ReplyDeletei imagine his work is never done...really nice haiku
ReplyDelete10 words that created and conveyed a good thought... Nice one!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
You and I are on the same wavelength. I like this a great deal.
ReplyDeleteI like the direction you took this.
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Wrinkles in time
ReplyDeleteSo many secrets hidden
Mys'try shows itself
I like the haiku and I think it goes really well with the image.
ReplyDeleteWouldn't that be wonderful to have it (time) all smooth.
ReplyDeleteLovely Haiku!
A great interpretation of the image.
ReplyDeleteWhat an intriguing concept and so well portrayed verbally and graphically.
ReplyDeleteImaginative take on the picture.
ReplyDeleteThat is a spooky image and I love your take on it. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteIs there any concept that you can't write about in 17 fantastic syllables? Such elaborate thoughts conveyed so succinctly and accurately. It’s an art, and you have amazing talent.
ReplyDeleteLove how we both used the photo prompt and also the words "labouring" and "wrinkles" come in to play on both of our poems but in different contexts. Thanks for the comments!
ReplyDeleteLove that phrase...wrinkles in time...I have such fond memories of the novel.
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SueAnn
Both together brings it all together, Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI like the smoothing of the wrinkles in time...nice...
ReplyDeleteNicely put. I just wish I hadn't wrinkles 'over' time!
ReplyDeleteWow, you have said a lot with few words. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteNow I wonder if wrinkles in time need smoothing? : )
GREAT haiku!!
ReplyDeleteI agree great Haiku!
ReplyDeleteThis is just excellent!
ReplyDeletemy words of admiration dont do your words of inspiration justice... well done!
ReplyDeleteLove your haiku Karen! :-)
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