This is beautiful, Karen.
"flutter of the feather's fall..." Clever and beautiful.
Oh, I'd like to be there on that shore! Lovely, Karen!
"flutter". YES preciseky ..so lovely :)
Also "precisely ". Lol.... Wonderful :)
good soft sounds to accompany this; the repeated 's' and 'f' with the 'o' gives it a very quiet feel. Fits with the flutter and whisper and stillness. Very nice.
beautiful, delicate and special *S*
I love the delicate manner of your poem~ Beautiful!
This brought from me a sigh...so nicely written.
Three great ways of describing the sounds of silence.
Image and haiku are simply gorgeous, Karen. Such gifts. :)
So lovely!...and I've tagged you in blogger-tag IF you want to play:) No pressure at all. Rules at my blog on the blogger-tag post.
Oh wow. Just wow, but a big WOW!
Wow is right ~ 'less is definitely more' here ~ thanks, namaste, Carol ~ Happy Weekend ^_^
That imperfect feather, bent and stained is just perfect.
Exquisite photo and beautiful words! Cathy
mysterious and as soft as a prayer.
Perfect and gentle.
Those whispers in your words and image... lovely...
Yes, a beauty!
Great photo and haiku!
Your haiku is so beautifully written...it made me think, once again.
this is so soft and lovely
Perfect haiku, perfectly illustrated. Just a lovely post!!!
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