Tragic but so very poetic.
An extremely well crafted, albeit sombre haiku.
Reminds me of how hopeless waging war is ... very well done!
Lovely Haiku. If one can say that about the subject. It is all to true.
well written haiku and great message ~thanks ~ namaste, Carol ^_^
This charcoal battle sketch reminds me of the prose of Morte d'Arthur. Chilling, and well done!
So sad. Very well written.
Wow Karen...Wonderfully written.
I think we can all relate to being that "wounded soul" when darkness comes into our lives sometimes.Great work!
I closed my eyes and imagined a young soldier in the dead of night hearing cannons booming and bullets flying by and I shuddered. War -- an awful thing.
Interesting, some similarities with my poem tonight.
That is poetic!
The perfect haiku for this prompt.If this was a competition, your haiku would win 1st prize.You've captured the essence of "battle"... really beautiful!
Unfortunately familiar at times. Nicely done.
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