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11 Mar 2012

The Mag - 108


soft susurrations
carried beyond boundaries
listen in the wind

text©Karen

Linking to The Mag 108

A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.

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24 comments:

  1. susurations is such a cool word...i am listening...

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  2. cool had to look up the word susurations then grasp the verse ...thank you x

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  3. Whispering;
    Sweet nothings in one's ear; tittillating.
    rel

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  4. Sound, motion, feeling, insight -- all caught in this tiny verse. Great.

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  5. Sensuously emotive, Karen. Thank you for sharing your expressions.

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  6. I'm with Brian - sussurations is such a cool word ... very nice

    http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-dawn.html

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  7. This is my second time in the dictionary this morning!

    =)

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  8. I love listening for susurrations in the wind. This is exactly what this Magpie means to me.

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  9. I love soft susurrations... this is beautiful, Karen.

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  10. Love the feel of this one.....beautiful writing!

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  11. Very nice ~

    Thanks for sharing this with Real Toads ~

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  12. Fantastic alliteration in "soft susurrations." Love the way you whisper.

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  13. Your haiku is a lovely sussuration in itself:)

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  14. Another beaut, well done.

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  15. Yes I had to look up the word...:)
    You did a lovely job with the prompt and I enjoyed your gentle poem.

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  16. Nicely done. This haiku has a mysterious tone to it.

    Hope you'll come visit me. :)

    -Mara

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  17. Boundaries and edges...I love how you held together the image with your words.

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  18. sometimes it's good to stop and listen to the wind, sometimes the wind doesn't give us a choice

    depth of field

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  19. this poem reads like a prayer.

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