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3 Mar 2012

Haiku Heights - Fate


essences collide
destiny glimpsed in your eyes
hold the gaze steady

Text ©Karen @Something Written

Linking to Haiku Heights
prompt - fate

18 comments:

  1. I should have added...

    been there!

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  2. Ah, that steady gaze is essential.

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  3. seize the day and fate in your hands~

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  4. That moment has never been forgotten.

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  5. who can hold the gaze longer

    senryu of lost soldiers

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  6. Ah, fate. I could curse it in several languages.
    Judy

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  7. Can we make our own fate---lovely verse--

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  8. ah, love said so well ~ namaste, carol (A CreativeHarbor)

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  9. And thats exactly what it was like for me too!

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  10. Yes, need to be steady... Else destiny goes missing!

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  11. "hold the gaze steady", for sure. i love this nice reminder. Great haiku. Thanks for writing it.
    Best, M.

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  12. Destiny is a fearful word. It brings out the uncertainty of being unable to walk on a desired path. What you have expressed here gives a bit of insight into facing what may come head on. That's just my interpretation.

    Have a nice day! :-)

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  13. It's not all that easy to hold the gaze when staring fate in the face...

    Fate Has Blessed Them

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