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| Still Life, 1670, detail by Jean François de Le Motte |
a small treasure
found
tucked away
among the debris
of what
once was
shinning
brightly...
beckoning
longing to be
remembered...
and loved once
again
~ Karen
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The Mag 121
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oh! this is beautiful..it caught my breath..xx
ReplyDeletebeautiful take...
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
hard to go back and look at these things sometimes, they can be so sad
ReplyDeletepainting details
Nice take on the small treasure full of memories ~
ReplyDeleteEvokes nostalgia and warmth in just a few phrases. Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteSmiles…I am glad that among the debris of what once was there are a few treasures…and perhaps a few things worth rekindling…
ReplyDeleteIt is amazing how lives can reduce to a few papers, mostly lost among debris. And yet these were people who loved and were loved. Your poem caught that perfectly.
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to come across small forgotten treasures every so often. This is a nice poem and describes that really well.
ReplyDeleteOnce was and now wants to be again.
ReplyDelete'longing to be remembered...
and loved once again'
No trouble here with the remembered
but to be loved again could get to be a tall order. :)
Very nice poem, Karen.
And a wonderful take on the prompt, wanting. Thank you.
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And such treasures makes one pause and take back in past for few moments!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
the small treasures can be the most significant ones - lovely work *S*
ReplyDeleteredeeming the debris of life - very cool poem, and a great style
ReplyDeleteNice piece of writing!:)
ReplyDeleteLovely words for the picture.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of something shining brightly amongst the dross, beckoning and hoping for attention. Hidden depths.
ReplyDeleteIt's always thrilling to find a bit of hidden treasure...
ReplyDeleteI like this style, few words paint a complete story....
ReplyDeletenice....sweet!
ReplyDeleteThe world around us craves love. Of course.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Short and sweet. An apt one too. :)
ReplyDeleteThe comfort we seek in such simple places. This makes me think of the wee folk and the treasures they leave, even beyond childhood. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my way. :)
Just Perfect, Karen.
ReplyDeleteSeemingly effortless.
Bravo!
These are the best of treasures.
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