Pages

3 May 2012

Night Wish

 

                                                    I’ve come to gaze upon a star,
                                                    and wish you back to me.
                                                    All pain has been forgotten.

                                                    The wounds have healed,
                                                    the heart repaired.
                                                    My arms are open wide.

                                                    I’ll wrap you tight in love’s caress,
                                                    until we greet the dawn.
                                                    Then I'll have to let you go.
                                                   
photo and text © by Karen @ Pixel Posts/Something Written

Written for -
prompt - wish

~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted by at
Labels: , ,

17 comments:

  1. That Someone3 May 2012 at 20:48

    Not a haiku! Nice form, it flows well, and an amazing photo. Be careful what you wish for ;)

    ReplyDelete
  2. Elephant's Child4 May 2012 at 03:09

    Hauntingly sad.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous4 May 2012 at 06:54

    Romantic but sad at the same time.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Daydreamertoo4 May 2012 at 07:29

    Having to lrt go of love always hurts. One wonders why we put ourselves through the pain. Beautiful, sad, lovely.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Fallingladies4 May 2012 at 18:53

    Beautiful and sad!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Magical Mystical Teacher4 May 2012 at 22:07

    Paradoxically, letting go is also a form of welcoming.

    Raven Has One Wish

    ReplyDelete
  7. Hannah4 May 2012 at 23:09

    So tender, so much longing. Beautiful.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Paul Andrew Russell5 May 2012 at 03:54

    A beautiful piece of writing.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Les...6 May 2012 at 10:53

    lovely ;)

    ReplyDelete
  10. Kerry O'Connor6 May 2012 at 13:49

    This is written in such a wistful and compassionate tone. Lovely piece.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Anonymous6 May 2012 at 15:27

    but if you let go, how sweet when he comes back

    renal test

    ReplyDelete
  12. Me6 May 2012 at 19:12

    I had to think about this one. I think its great, love the photo to.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Snowflake7 May 2012 at 03:02

    Loved it. Short and beautiful.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Kevin Routh7 May 2012 at 10:01

    This was perfect!
    Came here from your link at the Poets United Poetry Pantry...

    ReplyDelete
  15. Alcina7 May 2012 at 13:50

    It touches a part of heart and rings a nostalgic thought.
    Great weave of words and i can imagine all called love..

    ReplyDelete
  16. Eileen T O'Neill .....7 May 2012 at 14:52

    Karen,

    Night Wish, is such a tender and loving piece of writing. I think most readers will recogise moments like that :)

    Eileen

    ReplyDelete
  17. Unknown9 May 2012 at 16:25

    You've actually made "relationship relapse" sound attractive! I suppose it is at the moment it occurs.
    Well done!

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/05/08/boldly/

    ReplyDelete

I appreciate every comment! I can't respond to every comment, but I will return the favour and visit your blog.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)