this is lovely.
oh! this is beautiful..it caught my breath..xx
hard to go back and look at these things sometimes, they can be so sadpainting details
Nice take on the small treasure full of memories ~
Evokes nostalgia and warmth in just a few phrases. Nicely done!!
Smiles…I am glad that among the debris of what once was there are a few treasures…and perhaps a few things worth rekindling…
It is amazing how lives can reduce to a few papers, mostly lost among debris. And yet these were people who loved and were loved. Your poem caught that perfectly.
It's nice to come across small forgotten treasures every so often. This is a nice poem and describes that really well.
Once was and now wants to be again. 'longing to be remembered...and loved once again'No trouble here with the rememberedbut to be loved again could get to be a tall order. :)Very nice poem, Karen. And a wonderful take on the prompt, wanting. Thank you...
And such treasures makes one pause and take back in past for few moments!Beautiful.
the small treasures can be the most significant ones - lovely work *S*
redeeming the debris of life - very cool poem, and a great style
Nice piece of writing!:)
Such a powerful thing - yes - our written word, the 2D babble pulling our heartstrings!
Lovely words for the picture.
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I love the idea of something shining brightly amongst the dross, beckoning and hoping for attention. Hidden depths.
It's always thrilling to find a bit of hidden treasure...
I like this style, few words paint a complete story....
The world around us craves love. Of course.
Short and sweet. An apt one too. :)
The comfort we seek in such simple places. This makes me think of the wee folk and the treasures they leave, even beyond childhood. Lovely!Thanks for visiting my way. :)
Just Perfect, Karen.Seemingly effortless.Bravo!
These are the best of treasures.=)
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