I was going to ask how you were doing, but this does not sound like the haiku of a woman whose body is treating her kindly. It is excellent, but it is as harsh as the lazy winds which spear through you in winter.
Quite a scene you paint in this.
Wonderful brush strokes of paint in this image! Especially love "tattered landscape"!
You've painted a vivid scene with only a few words. Well done.
So evocative. Would a torrential downpour clear the smoldering fire? Or would a soft misty rainfall be better? I am just not sure any of those would quiet the howl, eh?
Powerful haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
what an ominous mood you set! excellente!
Powerful and haunting...
I want to reiterate what Elephant's Child had to say...the haiku speaks to me of both warmth and cold...and I thought of Dr. Zhivago of all things!
What a picture this paints, so many possibilities!
Quite a picture you've painted here. Very nicely done.
Hmmm ... quite a punch!!Before Our Time
terrific, can be taken in many ways, I like to "see" a campfire with wolves howling in the hills nearby.. well done *S*
Lovely imagery! I can see it so vividly.
Oh, my, there is something very haunting in this. It sent chills down my spine.
Wow. I love this. You create an vivid picture, tugging at our imagination to fill in more and know more about it. Great job!
you hit on a lot of sense in this haikuspace ship tanka
Such a clear image from this haiku, love it.
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