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5 Feb 2012

The Mag - 103



splintered shards of soul
offered up in reverence
hope waits in shadows

Text ©Karen @Something Written
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Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.

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28 comments:

  1. I believe also, that hope does wait in the shadows. Nice Haiku...!

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  2. Wow. Stunning. Photo and poem both.
    Judy

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  3. You've really captured the feel of the pic there.

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  4. wonderful magpie, thank you,

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  5. Great take on the Magpie!

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  6. I like this... especially the last line.

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  7. Interestingly,considering the image,the words are positive

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  8. excellent, cutting but hopeful words to a strongimage

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  9. I adored the construction of your haiku, lovely alliteration. I like the reassurance that "hope is waiting". Thank you for sharing this.

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  10. And again. I had to google the graveyard as well. Your words are soooo appropriate. Thank you.

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  11. may hope find them and only enhance their beauty...so very nice...

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  12. Beautiful, from one who knows too well of soul shards.

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  13. 'shards of soul' - perfect line!

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  14. the soul extends even from the grave: perfect!
    rel

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  15. Soul offered in the hope of resurrection.... nice.

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  16. splintered shards of soul

    perfect

    =)

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  17. very nice.....thanks for sharing your words

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  18. Thank you for this

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/02/grave-so-fine.html

    Wander

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  19. Beautiful interpretation!

    Anna :o]

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  20. Neat haiku you wrote here.

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  21. wonderful Haiku...very descriptive.

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