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22 Feb 2012

Draft - Sensational Haiku Wednesday



the chilled air tingles
your hardened heart breathes coldness
love abates the draft

Text ©Karen @Something Written

17 comments:

  1. Thank you. You are a supremely clever wordsmith.

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  2. excellent haiku ~ namaste,carol(A CreativeHarbor)

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  3. love mellows the coldest heart.

    Thank you for visiting my blog. I love your haiku.

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  4. Superbly crafted!

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  5. A song of ice and fire.

    Beautiful!

    JzB

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  6. so well written, impressive as ever *S*

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  7. wow I am always amazed on how you express your emotions through few lines of haiku..passing by Ms.Karen ;)

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  8. I love the imagery of cold versus warmth!
    Great haiku.

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  9. I felt the chill. Nice imagery.

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