How I know that bleak and lonely place. Just the same, I am glad to say that love and hope give colour to my days much more often.This is a powerful poem, Karen. Thank you. I hope it is a place that while you visit, does not hold you for long.
Masterful.
There is sadness here!
Yes this is very sad.
A beautiful image and your stark lines capture desolation perfectly.
What fine capture of painful emotions, circumstances.
Wow... you've said it perfectly...
The haiku and image work perfectly together, very sad and well done.
I like that first line on wounded soul ~ Lovely picture too~
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How I know that bleak and lonely place. Just the same, I am glad to say that love and hope give colour to my days much more often.
ReplyDeleteThis is a powerful poem, Karen. Thank you. I hope it is a place that while you visit, does not hold you for long.
Masterful.
ReplyDeleteThere is sadness here!
ReplyDeleteYes this is very sad.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful image and your stark lines capture desolation perfectly.
ReplyDeleteWhat fine capture of painful emotions, circumstances.
ReplyDeleteWow... you've said it perfectly...
ReplyDeleteThe haiku and image work perfectly together, very sad and well done.
ReplyDeleteI like that first line on wounded soul ~ Lovely picture too~
ReplyDeleteso much emotion in such brevity. nicely done. and the image? fabulous!
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