I really like that last line.
wonderful tribute haiku to someone ~ awesome photo ~ (A Creative Harbor)
I can tell you mined these words from deep within your heart...Snaky Sky Wire
A wonderful haunting haiku ~
I loved this when I first saw it on your other blog, and I love it still. What a wonderful tribute to him it is.
A lovely haiku!
to be honest my heart is surging with the intensity of your honoring.may we all live and die with such utter grace.
Beautiful tribute/memory... melancholic and beautiful in every word.
That is so wonderfully written, thankyou for that. He was very brave.
This is a very deep and moving haiku.
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