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22 Jan 2012

The Mag - 101


gently encumbered
vulnerability shown
exposing the soul
©Karen @Something Written
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A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.

Linking to The Mag 101

26 comments:

  1. The words perfectly match the photo.

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  2. OH TO BE ENCUMBERED WHEN EXPOSING MY SOUL
    TERRIFIC

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  3. I am savoring the words
    "gently encumbered"...
    well done.

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  4. Beautiful - every word just right.

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  5. That is an excellent haiku of your observation.

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  6. ..daringly awesome!!! exposing the soul - i loved that!!! thanks for the read!!!(:

    ~Kelvin

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  7. Just beautiful. And how I would love to be that flexible again.

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  8. I wondered when you would write again. It's been a long time coming, but worth the wait. You've made a good start here, don't stop.

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  9. nice...there is tension in being fully exposed...and the progression of your lines exposes this well...

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  10. Exposing more than
    soul, gently, carefully bound —
    more than black and white.

    I journeyed over from Cosmo's latest serviette notes. I'm just beginning to write haiku — wonderful to find you!

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  11. Interesting thought, beautifully expressed...

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  12. Matches the picture very nicley!

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  13. Exposing the soul and then some! Nice haiku

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  14. Thanks to everyone for taking the time to read and comment!

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  15. love your Haiku or short verse.

    profound entry.

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  16. 7 beautiful words for the prompt...

    JJRod'z

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  17. Hi Karen,
    I love the haiku, succinct and cutting. Wrapped up for us as neatly as this figure.

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