tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post5037872439309293373..comments2023-04-07T07:11:04.388-04:00Comments on Something Written: On The RoadKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05250682060195274022noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-62245897616221687032012-05-08T14:42:27.456-04:002012-05-08T14:42:27.456-04:00This poetry makes me very silent... wauw..Speechle...This poetry makes me very silent... wauw..Speechless. Thank you.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08466671880953112687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-84456816778309295792012-05-06T19:18:25.583-04:002012-05-06T19:18:25.583-04:00Love the form in this one, it flows wonderfully. G...Love the form in this one, it flows wonderfully. Great road pic, ahh Trout Lake!Menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-36439270407913664202012-05-06T05:44:07.092-04:002012-05-06T05:44:07.092-04:00Wow, such a wonderful haiku-cascade!Wow, such a wonderful haiku-cascade!Marithttp://www.maritspaperworld.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-18797297618455265132012-05-05T14:11:39.901-04:002012-05-05T14:11:39.901-04:00Beautiful. Whisperings of the past coming full cir...Beautiful. Whisperings of the past coming full circle.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-10035513893554815802012-05-05T11:22:54.599-04:002012-05-05T11:22:54.599-04:00Whoa! I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED your spiral haikus......Whoa! I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED your spiral haikus...very beautiful and thought provoking! Makes me want to try your pattern sometime!Dawn Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03079162211848499285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-63155704420119622082012-05-04T20:02:39.456-04:002012-05-04T20:02:39.456-04:00the tales they tell.. the things they know..the tales they tell.. the things they know..Lenorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05523570885159399658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-10798061964666302542012-05-04T18:05:12.365-04:002012-05-04T18:05:12.365-04:00This makes me feel like I am there walking down th...This makes me feel like I am there walking down the path listening to the trees!Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04020912478886423923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-81171709878251854302012-05-04T16:06:51.744-04:002012-05-04T16:06:51.744-04:00beautiful Karen!beautiful Karen!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-88826088354123899992012-05-04T15:40:37.426-04:002012-05-04T15:40:37.426-04:00I like how you made the haiku come full circle!I like how you made the haiku come full circle!Libbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14864587350512328594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-61585839166245383622012-05-04T11:40:22.488-04:002012-05-04T11:40:22.488-04:00echoes on the road ~ lovely haiku ~ metaphor of li...echoes on the road ~ lovely haiku ~ metaphor of life ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-35429385400468784772012-05-04T11:29:13.239-04:002012-05-04T11:29:13.239-04:00You weave a beautiful story, walking along this tr...You weave a beautiful story, walking along this trail.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08163848048048193138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-31266181453464930572012-05-04T09:28:25.437-04:002012-05-04T09:28:25.437-04:00your haiku is reminiscent of a "round" i...your haiku is reminiscent of a "round" in singing. so fitting as you take us full circle in the company of<br />mystery, the life and stories of all ancient forests.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-55696667158679196622012-05-04T06:50:13.214-04:002012-05-04T06:50:13.214-04:00I'm going to be on the road today, and I will ...I'm going to be on the road today, and I will be listening for echoes that might, just might, give me some sense of direction...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/05/04/raven-has-one-wish/" rel="nofollow">Raven Has One Wish</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-72624366383787049562012-05-04T03:36:24.859-04:002012-05-04T03:36:24.859-04:00Love those echoes.Love those echoes.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-76417746714115018372012-05-04T01:54:23.014-04:002012-05-04T01:54:23.014-04:00I love this photo and your haiku.I love this photo and your haiku.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-63166137896004828842012-05-03T17:21:42.647-04:002012-05-03T17:21:42.647-04:00This does echo, the way you wrote it. We have man...This does echo, the way you wrote it. We have many battlegrounds in the south, and I imagine echoes everywhere...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-2671197579733653942012-05-03T16:59:43.480-04:002012-05-03T16:59:43.480-04:00Oh, the echoing repetition is perfect! Love the fo...Oh, the echoing repetition is perfect! Love the form, Karen, and beautiful photo!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-44760038045009180832012-05-03T14:45:16.516-04:002012-05-03T14:45:16.516-04:00You've done this wonderfully. The paths are co...You've done this wonderfully. The paths are connected indeed.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-14091160520679307772012-05-03T12:18:56.703-04:002012-05-03T12:18:56.703-04:00A beautiful poem about the circuitous paths we tak...A beautiful poem about the circuitous paths we take in life....I love the way the lines repeat and loop.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-20731837297250064552012-05-03T12:17:24.822-04:002012-05-03T12:17:24.822-04:00the looping stanzas have the feel of bird flight. ...the looping stanzas have the feel of bird flight. <br />and the structure of a circular poem with a linear object like a road is striking.shawnacyhttp://shawnacykiker.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-88481527663100539322012-05-03T11:36:29.720-04:002012-05-03T11:36:29.720-04:00Love the echo effect!Love the echo effect!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-34515685887313066662012-05-03T09:47:57.969-04:002012-05-03T09:47:57.969-04:00Thanks for stopping in everyone!Thanks for stopping in everyone!Karennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-69410064293218875952012-05-03T05:41:28.103-04:002012-05-03T05:41:28.103-04:00Thank you.Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-65910918577877646062012-05-03T04:01:49.833-04:002012-05-03T04:01:49.833-04:00"echoes on the road..."
beautiful work,..."echoes on the road..."<br /><br />beautiful work, perfect pic, memorable feelings *S*Les...noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-41640970237551819052012-05-02T21:41:48.885-04:002012-05-02T21:41:48.885-04:00A beautiful circular poem. I can hear silence here...A beautiful circular poem. I can hear silence here.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.com