tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post2200370448719515797..comments2023-04-07T07:11:04.388-04:00Comments on Something Written: ElusiveKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05250682060195274022noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-23998308031401845912012-05-06T19:26:14.847-04:002012-05-06T19:26:14.847-04:00The last verse is my favorite, terrific writing. A...The last verse is my favorite, terrific writing. Ahh Fawn Lake!Menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-24243201413950088912012-05-05T11:00:43.631-04:002012-05-05T11:00:43.631-04:00oh my, this is such a tender, evocative series of ...oh my, this is such a tender, evocative series of haikus. it's quite true. lots of hidden places all around.totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-89036619829180716112012-05-02T09:11:49.506-04:002012-05-02T09:11:49.506-04:00Hi Karen, thank you for this nice prompt. I love ...Hi Karen, thank you for this nice prompt. I love those hiding places, those wrinkles in the soul. Goodness knows we most all have plenty of those. I have some that I would like to stay hidden [:)].<br />..<br />Sorry my return comment is late, we were on a cruise when I posted and on-line time was very precious.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-46446938048151775812012-05-01T06:32:37.666-04:002012-05-01T06:32:37.666-04:00Hi there - I see you have two blogs!
It would be ...Hi there - I see you have two blogs!<br /><br />It would be funny to find one of us is lurking in the background of the pictures we took on Kangaroo Island ten years ago! We should check!<br /><br />Stewart M - AustraliaStewart Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04622420206244603688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-25127303221220236362012-04-30T21:32:20.452-04:002012-04-30T21:32:20.452-04:00Thank you for this wonderful contribution to OSI! ...Thank you for this wonderful contribution to OSI! Your thoughts and the image are wonderful.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-49283572826338055142012-04-30T21:14:06.613-04:002012-04-30T21:14:06.613-04:00Your natural and beautiful poem fits so perfectly ...Your natural and beautiful poem fits so perfectly with the image. I also love the repetition and flow throughout the piece.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-5084771130285584532012-04-30T20:10:45.213-04:002012-04-30T20:10:45.213-04:00Oh Karen this is exquisite...the rhythm of your po...Oh Karen this is exquisite...the rhythm of your poem and the rhythm of shadow and light across the road are in synchronicity...this makes me think of a zen koan...elusive circles the mind spins trying to understand what is beyond comprehension.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-37806183550557454202012-04-30T14:41:39.565-04:002012-04-30T14:41:39.565-04:00Absolutely Beautiful and deeply captivating ..and ...Absolutely Beautiful and deeply captivating ..and gorgeous poetry to match..<br />VictoriaVictoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09280128561139519596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-64970027169840281152012-04-30T07:14:02.171-04:002012-04-30T07:14:02.171-04:00Such enlightenment in your haiku ~ thanks, namaste...Such enlightenment in your haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^<br /><br />Thanks for linking up with Magical Monday ~ ^_^carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-13574505882353569402012-04-29T21:41:37.651-04:002012-04-29T21:41:37.651-04:00Shadows and light. Life is a dance amid dappled li...Shadows and light. Life is a dance amid dappled light. Sometimes one lands on shadows; sometimes, on light.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07141627284221873201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-7822360497825363642012-04-29T19:41:07.973-04:002012-04-29T19:41:07.973-04:00i love the idea that truth always seeks the light....i love the idea that truth always seeks the light.<br />may we all strive for nothing less.<br />thanks for being here and sharing the gift of your generous words.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-65759099903231199852012-04-29T18:30:01.991-04:002012-04-29T18:30:01.991-04:00Great photo. And I love the way these link. Well...Great photo. And I love the way these link. Well done.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2012/04/29/elusive-osi/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-21862158563627400922012-04-29T16:12:20.425-04:002012-04-29T16:12:20.425-04:00I'm pursuing some elusive truths these days, a...I'm pursuing some elusive truths these days, and none of them have been lying within easy reach!<br /><br /><br />A haibun, <a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/04/29/honey-for-my-soul/" rel="nofollow"><b>Honey for My Soul</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-67099638950019087922012-04-29T13:44:20.926-04:002012-04-29T13:44:20.926-04:00great use of form, really like the last stanzagreat use of form, really like the last stanzaMark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-14613814843077930372012-04-29T13:42:36.137-04:002012-04-29T13:42:36.137-04:00this is very good! And thanks for the great prompt...this is very good! And thanks for the great prompt this week.<br /><br />http://veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com/2012/04/28/a-mr-cheddar-haiku-elusive-prey/Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-68282176405719034722012-04-29T13:35:15.455-04:002012-04-29T13:35:15.455-04:00Way to truth? great picture.Way to truth? great picture.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-42907447048007760502012-04-29T11:44:53.731-04:002012-04-29T11:44:53.731-04:00Ah, a great truth on that path.Ah, a great truth on that path.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-17743294253091157062012-04-29T08:35:23.351-04:002012-04-29T08:35:23.351-04:00It's true. Sometimes, we never know where trut...It's true. Sometimes, we never know where truth might lead us, especially if truths are really lies in disguise. <br /><br />Great haiku!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-74449893491620264512012-04-29T06:19:04.019-04:002012-04-29T06:19:04.019-04:00masterful, beautiful and unforgettable work... wel...masterful, beautiful and unforgettable work... well done! *VBS*Les...noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-13856612837158347262012-04-29T02:45:44.027-04:002012-04-29T02:45:44.027-04:00Firstly, what a perfect click! :)
And secondly, w...Firstly, what a perfect click! :)<br /><br />And secondly, what a beautiful poem. I loved your work with images and metaphors.<br /><br />"wrinkles in the soul<br />smoothed by promise of belief<br />hidden in shadows" - My favourite part.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3215486361404331133.post-17334150851528659202012-04-29T02:24:09.401-04:002012-04-29T02:24:09.401-04:00Wow. And a glorious photograph to go with it. Th...Wow. And a glorious photograph to go with it. The photo was enhanced by the words which were enhanced by the photo.<br />Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com