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18 Mar 2012

Wrinkles In Time




master of the hours
labouring furiously
smoothes wrinkles in time

text©Karen

Written for -  The Mag 109
A weekly challenge at Magpie Tales, The Mag
Write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
 
 
Linking with-The Poetry Pantry

28 comments:

  1. i like the idea of having machines to smooth out the wrinkles of time

    angular acceleration

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  2. wrinkles in time...great words. Not sure where it takes my mind, but I like it. Laurel

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  3. Wrinkles in time Nice found words I have tried to write a haiku along with this picture, but I didn't succeeded.

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  4. I love this! Nice haiku that works well with the picture, but also stands alone :)

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  5. i imagine his work is never done...really nice haiku

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  6. 10 words that created and conveyed a good thought... Nice one!

    JJRod'z

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  7. You and I are on the same wavelength. I like this a great deal.

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  8. I like the direction you took this.

    =)

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  9. Wrinkles in time
    So many secrets hidden
    Mys'try shows itself

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  10. I like the haiku and I think it goes really well with the image.

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  11. Wouldn't that be wonderful to have it (time) all smooth.
    Lovely Haiku!

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  12. A great interpretation of the image.

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  13. What an intriguing concept and so well portrayed verbally and graphically.

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  14. Imaginative take on the picture.

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  15. That is a spooky image and I love your take on it. Thank you.

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  16. Is there any concept that you can't write about in 17 fantastic syllables? Such elaborate thoughts conveyed so succinctly and accurately. It’s an art, and you have amazing talent.

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  17. Love how we both used the photo prompt and also the words "labouring" and "wrinkles" come in to play on both of our poems but in different contexts. Thanks for the comments!

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  18. Love that phrase...wrinkles in time...I have such fond memories of the novel.
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  19. Both together brings it all together, Very nicely done.

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  20. I like the smoothing of the wrinkles in time...nice...

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  21. Nicely put. I just wish I hadn't wrinkles 'over' time!

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  22. Wow, you have said a lot with few words. Wonderful.
    Now I wonder if wrinkles in time need smoothing? : )

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  23. my words of admiration dont do your words of inspiration justice... well done!

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